正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I have good friend in my class. His name is Xiaoxiao. He usually goes to school at ten to eight am. He often goes home at four pm. His favorite sprots is swim. He usually does his homework at seven o'clock. He is good at drawing pictures. I like him very much.