假如你是李明,你的班里来了一位英国交换生Paul。他在和你的交谈中表示在中国学习压力很大。请你给他写封信,给他提一些建议。
3.多做运动,运动可以帮助自己缓解压力,并且有助于睡眠。
用五句话表达全部的内容,并组成一篇连贯的短文。(信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入句数);
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;句法方面做的很棒,加强复杂句的使用;文中很少出现过渡词和衔接词;可以适当增加副词的使用;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
I hear voices in my head,they council me,they understand,they talk to me. You got your rules and your religion,all designed to keep you safe.But when rules start getting broken,you start questioning your faith.I have a voice that is my savior,hates to love and loves to hate.I have the voice that has the knowledge and the power to rule your fate.I hear voices crying,I see heroes dying,I taste blood that drying,I feel tension rising.They tell me things that I will do,they show me things I'll do to you.They talk me,they talk to me!All the lawyers are defenseless,all the doctors are disease.And the preachers all are sinners,and police just take the grease.All you judges you are guilty,all the bosses I will fire,all you bankers will have losses.Politicians are all liars.I see darkness falling,