文中词汇表达多样性不足,在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累;能够使用一些不错的从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
It's sure that reading is good to us. there is a question that whether should read a lot or just our favourite. Some people argue that we should read a lot of books, so we can learn more knowledges. They think the master must have read thousands of books. In addition, if reading just those books which interest us, we usually have false principle. some people think that we should read interesting books, only in this way can we keep the habit to read, otherwise, we will feel reading is boring soon. Everyone knows a lot knowledge is necessary. As far as I'm concerned, we ought to read books wisely, as for those that we like, we can read a lot, as for those that we don't like, we should read a few occasionally.