学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
"If you want to make your university' life colorful, you had better plan your university's life well and prepare to enjoy a busy and painful four years." This is what my teacher tod us at the first day of university. Once upon a time, I did not take it into my heart. But now, I know why my teacher warned us. Just because the first final exam, I failed to gain satisfied scores. As a student who always got high grade and praise from teachers, I have taken the fact, high scores, for granted. Because I do not need to spend too much time in studying and is easy to get high scores. And I did like that at the first semester.At last, only to find that I gained bad scores. So I went to ask my teacher why my grades were not good as I thought. He told me why. From then on, I know just due to my laziness which caused my failness. And I changed with the help of my teacher's help. Studying becomes a significant role in my life. When I have time, I will study. With time goes by, my study becomes better and better. No pain, no gain. That's right. Colledge life just likes sowing seeds. Only we learn how to sow and take actions can we harvest the rewards.