小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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let me introduce jiajia who is my best friend.we are partner.she kind of me ,and i fond of her.she has long hair,big face,round nose and white shin.she is a lovely girl with a warlm heart .she is tall.hot body.many boys love her,but she never love somebody.she is a clear up girl.as time,she ofen hung up a sadness face.I can't understand her many times.