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学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
"If you want to enjoy a colorful college life, you had better plan your university's life well and prepare to enjoy a busy four years." This is what my teacher told us at the first day of college. Once upon a time, I did not take it into my heart. But now, I know why my teacher warned us. Just because the first final exam, I failed to gain high scores. As a student who always got high grade and praise from teachers, I have taken the fact, high scores, for granted. Because I do not need to spend too much time in studying and is easy to get high scores. And I did like that at the first semester.At last, only to find that I gained bad scores. So I went to ask my teacher why my grades were not good as I thought. He told me why and analysed the reason why I had mistakes in the paper. With a red face, I apologized to him. Then he asked me about how I spent my daily life and told me what causes my failure that exam. Besides, he told me how to get rid of my bad behavior and is willing to help me when I have problems. From then on I changed with the help of my teacher's help. Studying becomes a significant role in my life. When I have time, I will study. With time goes by, my study becomes better and better. From my experience, I conclude that not only our study need us to work hard, but other things also need. Doing one thing, we need to try our best. No pain, no gain. That's right. College life just likes sowing seeds. Only we learn how to sow and take actions can we harvest.
