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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
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Compared with mountain, the image of plain appears rarely at the very beginning. With the development of plot,the symbolism of plain has completely different meaning from mountain. It is always the symbol of destruction, messy war and death. The priest is from mountain area who is on behalf of decent, honest and love God. The captain who comes from lowland just makes boring jokes and has little brief in God. At the beginning of the book, When the priest suggests Henry to go to Abruzzi, a beautiful and rustic place, the captain just interrupts him and says that they should go whorehouse before it shuts. There is a obvious comparison between mountain and plain. What is more, when Henry retreats through the countryside, he and the other drivers stop at an abandoned farmhouse to rest, however, the girls they saved at a town refuse to go in, as they can feel little sense of security. When they get closed to Udine, they come cross the German troop in an open field where nothing can provide the necessary protection. They have no choice but to be outgunned by emery fire. As a result, Aymo, Henry’s driver, is shot and dead disastrously. “Aymo lay in the mud with the angle of the embankment. He was quite small and his arms were by his side, his puttee-wrapped legs and muddy boots together, his cap over his face.”(Hemingway, A Farewell to Arms 162). Reading through the whole novel, the plain is haunted with an unsafe feeling. The evacuation what happened in the plain is destructive. Everywhere is filled with the abandoned tracks, houses, carriages and the downhearted soldiers, the numb refugees and dead bodies. Police keep firing and lose their minds, all the things are at a mess and the plain turns to be a hell, everything is covered by suffering and horror. Similarly, the couple flee to Switzerland and have a short peaceful life in the mountain. Unfortunately, it is a time for her to give birth to a child, they decide to move to Lausanne, a big town located in the plain where Catherine died for parodynia. It seems to be an unpredictable disaster, but as a tragic love story, Hemingway makes all the disaster have an inner relationship with plain. In other words, it is the plain that makes the whole story more miserable. The plain as the miserable imagine, deepen the theme of the novel in an inconspicuous way.
