小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dog whose name is DuDu.He is nine.He like sleep very much when he eat after.So,he is very fat.He is kind and cut.But if you put he food,he is very angry.It's looks like afaid!He has big eyes,long ears and long tail.DuDU likes eating beef and chicken.I like DuDu very much.