托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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The troops march silently in the rain and the war goes badly. There is no emotional content connected to the fact that seven thousand men have died at the beginning of the novel. It seems to prove that the disease brought upon by rain is so powerful that it is considered lucky to cause seven thousand people to died. The rain have made a fundamental tune of destruction and is associated with death directly. Rain appear all the time in the novel with the symbolism of departure, disaster, misfortune and helplessness. When Henry wounds and returns to the hospital in Milan, he and Catherine enjoy a good time, At that time, the weather is sunny and peaceful. While Henry has to return to the front line, the weather turns terrible and begins to rain. They have an unwilling departure in the rain.