托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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There is little stress on emotion but focus on the nature, the rain. Hemingway portrays a picture that is just like a scene of the old tragedy movie, in this plot, Nothing can hold a surge of bitterness but the soundless rain push forward sorrow to the peak. From the beginning of the novel to the end, the rain falls constantly. And it is the symbols of the death, horror, destruction and depression. If the novel was a building with woeful material, then we may say that rain was window of the building. We can look out through the window but no way to flee out through the window. Under this circumstance, people are surround by mystery, sadness and despair. The author utilizes rain constantly to deliver the scene of disaster, death and tragedy which make readers feel the spontaneously negative emotion about the evil war