2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(42):和老师建立良好的师生关系

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；但从句使用不熟练，注意平时练习中多积累；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

The writer went to Italy during holidays. In his mind, he thought about his postcards everyday. That is why the postcards always spoil his holidays. He didn't send any cards to his friends. On the final day, he bought 37 cards and spent the whole day in his room. In the end, he still didn't write a single card.