2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(42):和老师建立良好的师生关系

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The writer has just received a letter from his brother. His brother, Tim, is an engineer. Tim has already been to Australia for six months. As far, he has visited a great number of places. Now, he is on the way to Alice Spring, a small town. Tim is finding this trip is very exciting even though he has never been abroad before.