2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(42):和老师建立良好的师生关系

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Mr.Scott has two garages. One is in Silbury and the other is in Pinhurst. Pinhurst is only five miles from Silbury. He can't get telephone for his new garage, then he bought twelve pigeons. And in three minutes, the pigeon can cover the distance. I am so happy i can write composition.