2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(42):和老师建立良好的师生关系

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A beggar knocked the writer's door when she has just moved to her new house in Bridge Street. The beggar asked for a meal and a glass of beer, she gave to him. In return for this, he sang songs. Later she knew him from a neighbor. His named Percy Button and he called every house once a month and always ask these.