托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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Henry’s love undergoes great changes, he does not fall in love with Catherine at the first time. The war makes Henry can not fell himself. In the free time, Henry and his friends spend lots of time on wine and whorehouse. As he needs to find another spiritual substance to keep his psychological balance, love becomes his shelter. Henry pay more attention to Catherine’s body and consider it is better than going every evening to the whorehouse. In brief, Henry is selfish and he even is not responsible for the love. However, when Henry is taken back to Milan as he is wounded badly at the front, he can doing nothing and begin to miss Catherine unconsciously. When Catherine happens to work here and says hello to him, he thinks in this way: “She looked fresh and young and very beautiful. I thought I had never seen anyone so beautiful. When I saw her I was in love with her. Everything turned over inside of me. I was crazy about her.” (Ernest,Hemingway,1929:75) War is the most cruel and the love is the best thing in the world, Henry has witnessed the bloody war and looks forwards to pure love. Henry’s romance with Catherine blossoms after a surgery on his knee. Catherine not only takes care of his wound, but also have a tremendous heal on Henry’s mental. They go to restaurants and horse races. He becomes responsible for his love. He changes his view on Catherine and does not consider her as a sex mate anymore. When Henry returns to the battlefield, the conversation between Henry and Rinin can prove the change for Catherine.