2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(42):和老师建立良好的师生关系

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Detectives were waiting at the airport all morning. They were expecting a valuable parcel of diamonds from South Africa. When the plane arrived, two men carried it into Customs House. Two detectives opened it. To their surprise, the parcel was full of sands and stones. Joe's garden is the best one in our town. He won 'The Nicest Garden Competition' each year. Bill's garden also has a fine garden, but compare with Joe's, not good enough. Writer's garden is terrible and he always win a little prize for the worst garden in the town.