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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;句法方面做的很棒,加强复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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Henry is serious and angry, he does not allow anyone to slander Catherine. He is trying his best to protect her. When the German troops make a fierce attack, Henry is not interested in the war anymore and hopes to stay with Catherine. He misses Catherine so much that he thinks about her even in the dream. Henry doesn’t know what true love is. The eleventh chapter in the novel, the priest goes to the field hospital to visit Henry. The priest tells him what true love is: “When you love, you wish to do things for, and you wish to serve.”(Ernest,Hemingway,1929:128) At their relationship develops, he gradually knows what love is. He tries to protect Catherine, While Catherine pregnant, he asks her to marry him to maintain her reputation, when Catherine is going to give birth to a child, he recommends them to move to the bigger town where is near hospital. He is willing to accept suggestions to make Catherine happy. For instance, he wears beard for a long time. Love becomes an indispensable part of his life. When Catherine is in danger, he prays the God that he would do anything if the God would not take Catherine away. He even hate his own baby as the child makes Catherine suffered so much pain. He understands what true love is and learns to sacrifice for love.

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