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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17596
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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Henry doesn’t know what true love is. In chapter 11 of the novel , the priest goes to the field hospital to visit Henry. The priest tells him what true love is: “When you love, you wish to do things for, and you wish to serve.”(Ernest,Hemingway,1929:128) At their relationship develops, he gradually knows what love is. When Catherine is pregnant He tries to protect Catherine from harm and danger , he asks her to marry him to maintain her reputation, when Catherine is going to give birth to a child, he recommends them to move to the bigger town where is near hospital. He is willing to accept suggestions to make Catherine happy.

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