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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17592
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,学术词汇使用过少;句法方面做的不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Henry doesn’t know what true love is. In chapter 11 of the novel , the priest goes to the field hospital to visit Henry. The priest tells him what true love is: “When you love, you wish to do things for, and you wish to serve.”(Ernest,Hemingway,1929:128) At their relationship develops, he gradually knows what love is. He tries to protect Catherine from harm and danger When Catherine is pregnant. he asks her to marry him in order to maintain her reputation, when Catherine is going to give birth to a child, he recommends them to move to the bigger town where is near hospital. He is willing to accept suggestions to make Catherine happy.

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