拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
In these days,i have found that some students in my class lose heart in Eiglish.AS a matter of fact,Enflish is important in our daily life.For example,if we are good at English so that we can communicate with American,and it will provide us more chances to get a job with a high income.So it is important for us to learn English well. Actually,my English is quite fluently in my class.As for me,i think if you want to improve your English you must have to be confident at first.Secondly you should read more English magazines.And it is more important to speak English as much as you can.