文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
With the development of education, more and more students study English. But they pay more attention to the words and grammars. Less and less students can speak English fluently, and most of college students are learning mute English. I think it's the several reasons that cause the fact. First, they regard the English as a task but not an interest, so they don't emphasize the importance of oral English and they just want to pass the exams. Second, the English teachers don't give students chances to practice speaking English. Third, the college students are afraid to speak English, because they are fearful of making mistakes. I don't think it's a good situation. If this kind of situation continues, there are less and less students speaking English. It will lead a bad effect. What should we do to end mute English? In my opinion,there are some steps helping college students learning and speaking English. First, as college students, we should form an interest of learning and speaking English. Second, for English teachers, they should try their best to create chances to include college students in speaking oral English activities. Third, college students should be brave and persistent when they learn English. They shouldn't be afraid of speaking English and making mistakes. In general, I think if college students could do these, they can end mut English.