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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
An ordinary man's life may last about dozens of years. It is not short but not long. How to live a meaningful life become a essential problem in our lives. I n my opinion, the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it. Some people died young, but people remember him for a long time. For example, Zhang Guorong, one of the famous singer in 1980s, was died when he was 47 years old, but many people still remenber and love him now. He devoted himself to his career and contribute lots of wonderful songs, which outlast his life. On the contrary, some people have a long life,but when they are old, they can not count something useful they have done. They think their lives are meaningless. In conclusion, the greatest use of life is to spend it for somrthing that will outlast it.
