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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46257
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇。

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as the above chart shows ,the higher education you have received ,the higher pay you will get.by contrast,if your education level is lower,you are more likely to be employed.people who get a bachelor's degree and even higher can get a pay above the average earnings,797 dollars a week.however,less than high school diploma means a higher employment rate ,which is the double of the average rate,7.6 per cent. here is a saying goes ,knowledge is power.the more education you get ,the more equipped you are for the future.in the tech-centred world, many emplers prefer those who have professional knowledge,so such people can make more money because they are rare.positons like cleaners,gardeners and so on don't need people learn many things ,so they get a lower pay,but they are needed in huge quantities,which gives the explaination for the phenomenon that an lower educational status corresponds with a higher employment rate. above all,education pays.

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