Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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as the above chart shows ,the higher education you have received ,the higher pay you will get.by contrast,if your education level is lower,you are more likely to be employed.people who get a bachelor's degree and even higher can get a pay above the average earnings,797 dollars a week.however,less than high school diploma means a higher employment rate ,which is the double of the average rate,7.6 per cent. here is a saying goes ,knowledge is power.the more education you get ,the more equipped you are for the future.in the tech-centred world, many emplers prefer those who have professional knowledge,so such people can make more money because they are rare.positons like cleaners,gardeners and so on don't need people learn many things ,so they get a lower pay,but they are needed in huge quantities,which gives the explaination for the phenomenon that an lower educational status corresponds with a higher employment rate. above all,education pays.