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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
An ordinary man's life may last about dozens of years. It is not short but not long. Nowadays,how to live a meaningful life become a essential problem in our lives. In my opinion, the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it. Some people died young, but people remember him for a long time. For example, Zhang Guorong, one of the famous singer in 1980s, was died when he was 47 years old, but many people still remember and love him now because he devoted himself to his career and contribute lots of wonderful songs. On the contrary, some people have a long life,but when they are old, they can not count what they have done. They think their lives are meaningless. In conclusion, the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.
