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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12937
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;学术词汇的使用希望还能更熟练一些,拼写检查还需加强;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

At present, more and more people use the internet to communicate with others .It cause that we have a less face-to-face contact with our family or friends .Though, it's no doubt that we can contact with further people more convenient.Sometimes, we spend more time in chating with the people we don't know in the net but don't even talk with our family.We forget to take care the people aroud us which makes more gap between us. I don't think electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact.When we glance on the computer to communicate with others everyday ,we don't really promove our relationship but we are used to do it.And with the less time to have a face-to-face contact ,we have more strange with the man around.There is no more love between the huamn beings.

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