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My foreign friend come to visit my hometown, I'll take he to visit our high school.I think our high school is the most beautiful place in our town.I think take he to arrive our high school that will improve him to know me more. Firstly,I will take him to come in our classroom, and tell him this is I spend three years in here.I stay the classroom to study and with my friends take many thing about our highschool life. Secondly, getting to our eating room.I think our school food is very good. I believe that my foreigen friend will like our school food.Last but not least, I will with him to our library.In there have a lot of books prove us to read.And there have some foreign books,I can talk about my foreign. Lastly,I believe my foreign friend will like our high school, and he will think our hometown is extremely beautiful.