2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My foreign friend come to visit my hometown, I'll take he to visit our high school.I suppose our high school is the most fine place in our town.I think take he to arrive our high school that will improve him to know me more. Firstly,I will take him to come in our classroom, and tell him this is a place I spend three years.I study in the classroom and with my friends take many thing about our high school life. Secondly, getting to our dining room.I consider our school food is delicious. I believe that my foreigen friend will like our school food.Last but not least, I will with him to our library.In there have a lot of books prove us to read.And there have some foreign books,I can talk about my foreign. Lastly,I believe my foreign friend will like our high school, and he will think our hometown is extremely beautiful.