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The old saying is that seeing is believing,most of people are so firm belief of it that always draw a conclusion.Like a coin have two sides,things have its different aspects.Are you sure seeing from our eyes is truth? Recently,a topic that a man driver hit a women driver in Chengdo pays attention to the public and earns serve debate among people.At firstly,Most of people accuse man driver that he attacked the woman.Nonetheless,after the video exposed,we still realize most of us are chatted by the woman because her photos in microblog.what a fronic truth. When talking about essencial of things,How can we tell the truth when we face to accident in our life?The truth is immerged and find it to observe not only external things bue also internal of its,in act.Only have rational and mature attitude,can we draw a reasonable conclusion.
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