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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Recently，there exist a phenomenon that parents too spoil their children to children can't live without the help of others. Parents always do everything for their kids,such as,cooking,clothing,shopping and so on.It causes kid would not need to learn how to make themselves independent.Children can rely on parents no matter what happens.However,parents can not live with their children all the time and children must learn the important of independent.After all,kids will grow up and should face difficulties only by themselves.Therefore,spoiling may destroy the future of children and parent must help children to be independent. As for as I'm concerned,parents should put their hands away and believe children can solve the daily problem if they want. Parents should teach their children how to do it instead of helping them completely.Parents can change the way of education and encourage children operation ability.
