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We are used to the changing technology and golobalization. The earth is more likely a country. With the Internet, we can get imformation easily and quikly. However, a the saying goes,''Every coin has two sides,'' more and more people are concerntrated on the Internet and ignore things around them , that is, A wealth of imfoemation creates a poverty of attetion A news said a boy ran into a pillar when he focus on his cellphone. This kind of thing is not rare. A survey show that nowadays more more people, especilly young people spend more time on their smart phones , ipads and computers and pay less attention to daily life. If someone ask they what happed yesterday, they may answer I do not know, you can search on the Internet. How ridiculous! What's more, beacuse of less attention, their memory is declining.
