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大体意思：
网络的近与远 一/客观描述图：很多人在上网 二/说明意思：网络的普及是拉近了人们的距离还是使人们越来越疏远？
可适当增加从句和长句的使用；文章词汇表达多样性要提高，单词拼写方面还要继续努力；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Look at this picture,we can found out internet used many people, and linked with each people.But everyone still staied at themselves place alone.Do you think internet let people can face to face or far away? There are some reasones to come from people of internet.Firstly,internet can sheeping, playing and talking with anyone all the world. Secondly,internet can shortter many times and easy to our life. There are doubt that internet can easy to our life in some ways. But it still can not do everything,such as drainking is happliness with friends or family.So I think internet let people far away .
