2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Look at this picture,we can find out internet used many people, and linked with each person.But everyone still staid at themselves place alone.Do you think internet let people can face to face or far away? There are some reasoners to come from people of the internet.Firstly,internet can shiping, playing and talking with anyone all the world. Secondly,internet can shortter many times and easy to our life. There are doubt that internet can easy to our life in some ways.But it still can not do everything,such as drinking is happiness with friends or family.So I think internet let people far away .