3.give your point of view
大体意思:
网络的近与远 一/客观描述图:很多人在上网 二/说明意思:网络的普及是拉近了人们的距离还是使人们越来越疏远?
作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Look at this picture,we can find out internet used many people, and linked with each person.But everyone still staid at themselves space alone.Do you think internet let people can face to face or far away? There are some reasons to come from people of the internet.Firstly,internet can shipping, playing and talking with anyone all the world. Secondly,internet can shorter many times and easy to our life. There are doubt that internet can easy to our life in some ways.But it still can not do everything,such as drinking is happiness with friends or family.So I think internet let people far away.