高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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I will never abandon because of my dream.Dream always tells me that I need to do what is beneficial to me.However,people always say to me that you can't do it well,it's so hard for you.I'm nervous,but,I want to tell everyone that I well do it to the best of my ability.