高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；作者词汇积累很好，不过单词拼写方面要继续努力；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

My favorite sport pallying football is my favorite.I fell in love with it by chance .One day ,I found a football on my way home.I went to home did my homework I star paly this a football. I was so about the round ball that began to paly it with my firends.form then on,football became paly of my life .I ofen paly football with my calssmateafter calss.however I found my porfer to paly football , some football with anything. Among all the football stars.I admire Beckham most.It is not his handsome appearance,but his skill that impress me a lot,nowday we ofen train ourselves,and sometimes we compete in football games in order to improve our skill.My gretast dream is to become a professional football palyer in the futuer.