小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My best friend, Tim, is 32 years old. He works an an architest in a large business company. I have not seen him for weeks because he has gone abroad on business. He has been to nearly every city in this country.We have been goods friends since 1999. He is a tall, handsome and intelligent. In our spare time, we ususally fish for hours on a river and then have dinner together. He always says, 'Dude, I'm really enjoy staying with you.'