小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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This is a photograph of my best friend, Tim, who is a very clever boy. He has two big eys and short hair. He always wears jacket and jeans. In the picture, you can see that Tim is kicking a football. Footbhall playing is his fovourite sports. On sundays, we ususally go and play games by a small river called Jianglin, which cut across the park near my home.