作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Nowadays,more and more people are cracy about certificate.Also,their porpuses are vary a lot. Some people believe that certification is necessarily for their job,and it is very useful for someone finding a job.They serve certification as important as their family.Meanwhiles,they spend all their time pursuing certification. Others thinks that certification is an honour.The more certification in hands ,the more proud they will.They thinks,people will thingk highly of themself if they embrace certification. When it comes to me,certificate craze has two sides,just like coin has two sides,it has both advantages and disadvantages.