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2011年6月英语六级作文真题:热衷证书考试

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:46浏览次数:3104
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题目 My opinion on certificate craze
要求
1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同
3.在我看来……
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分68.5分
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作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,more and more people are cracy about certificate.Also,their porpuses are vary a lot. Some people believe that certification is necessarily for their job,and it is very useful for someone finding a job.They serve certification as important as their family.Meanwhiles,they spend all their time pursuing certification. Others thinks that certification is an honour.The more certification in hands ,the more proud they will.They thinks,people will thingk highly of themself if they embrace certification. When it comes to me,certificate craze has two sides,just like coin has two sides,it has both advantages and disadvantages.

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