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Miss Liu is our new english teacher. She is the most beautiful teacher I have ever seen. She has got lang hair and two big, bright eyes. She always know how to make herself beautiful. Miss Liu is a good teacher.We love her very much. She not only speaks English well but her handwriting is pretty. Since she began teaching us English, we all became enjoy English class. Nearly everyone in our class have a big progress .