2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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undoubtedly,the serious and severe truth is that the quality of people especially living in megacities has been decresing drmatically,therefore, i will analyze the reasons why it happens and illustrate the relevant actions dealing with the lasting problems. first of all, the biggest cause accounts for the list is that citizens in flourish areas suffer from enormous pressure overweighing imagination. for exampe, there is a well-known research stating a surprising conclusion that almost all people living in metropolitan regions feel depression and unhappiness ,which turns over the majority of people's thinking and sounds like incredible. the reasons explaining the previous issue are various, but,a striking point among those things is the increasing pollution and environmental problem. human-beings utilizing a wide range of natural resources and releasing infinite waste such as carbon dioxide and dirty water, the local ecological balance is being destructed deeply, followed by a series of disastrous outcomes such as the decrease of creature variety and an increasing number of people reaching all kinds of respiratory diseases for exampe,asthma. secondly, the working pressure is another factor causing people having a negative attitude towards life. due to the fierce and strong competition between workers, of course, employers would like to hire employees with excellent career skills and knowledge bases,which asks a higher criterion to those who want to find a relaxing but well-paying job. however, certainly, we can figure out the soutions to help people out of the swamp.for instance,the government should fulfill the obligation that the relationship between humans and other lives should be harmonious and kind, building artificial parks in the center of the city,and planting a lot trees in the polluted areas.besides, for ourselves, it is essential to keep a positive and optimistic mood and do exercise more, enabling us to grow physically and mentally and dropping any unhealthy habits. overall, pressure and pollution are the two principal causes for human-beings owning a worse life quality in developed regions but they could beat the troubles by themselves and via external helps.