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作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
A remote oriental philosopher has said that wealth is nothing without mental health. That is to say, nothing in our life is more crucial than struggling for it. As to our student, mental health is extraordinarily significant. It would impact our life widely. Owning to this condition, our school should take some measures to keep mental healthy. First and foremost, our school should organize some forum, which covers mental health. Furthermore, our teachers should have a heart to heart conversation when they find some specially. Last but not least, school should take some activities after class. Only in this way, can our student be of freedom. Just as the old saying goes, happiness lies first of all in health. Nevertheless, we can take some measures to keep healthy. From one aspect, we can read multitudinous classical literature to enrich our view. From another aspect, we can take part in distinctive activities. Only in this method, can our life be of significance.
