小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher is a good woman.She is our chinese teacher.She has a black and long hair.She has two big and black eyes.She likes read books and newspapers.Does she like sports? Yes,she does.She aways help us solve bsome problems.So,when we have a problem,we aways asked her.Sometimes,she with our go to park at the weekend.We are all like her.