小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dog called Dudu. It is black and white. I love Dudu at the first time I caught sight of him. At that time Dudu was only three months old. Now he is nine years old. Dudu always bark at the door when he wants to go out. Recently I have trained him to press his paw on the latch to let himself out. Dudu soon became an expert at opening the gate.