小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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Jim is one of my best school friends who has a happy family. There are five people in his family, his grand parents, his parents and Jim. Jim's grandparents have retired and they always stays at home. Jim's father, Mr. Simth, is a dentist doctor. Jim's mother is a beautiful lady who is our maths teacher.