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Most people like collecting things. The strangest collection I have seen which belongs to the Browns. The Browns has collected hundreds of clocks. There are clocks everywhere in their house. Some clocks are big and some of them are samll. Mr. Brown has had some shelves made and lines them in the living room to put many of the clocks.