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Most people like collecting things. The strangest collection I have seen which belongs to the Browns who possesses hundreds of clocks. There are clocks in every room of their house. Some clocks are big and some of them are samll. Some shelves, were lined in the living room and were filled with clocks. Even with so many clocks around, the Browns never konw what time it is because each colcks keeps its own time.