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It was Sunday yesterday. I always busy on Sundays and I was busier yesterday than ever before. I got up early and then helped mother do some housework. After had got everything in order, I began to do my homework. I did my homework not only very carefully and very clearly. In the afternoon, I played tennis with my best friend, Ted. I had no sooner got home than I opened on the TV and watched CCTV6. I went to bed at 9 o'clock as usual. What a good day I had.