拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
My opinion on certificate craze Nowadays,more and more people are willing to take part in some exams with a certificate.These certificates just like a sign to prove someone have capabilities in the filed. The reason of people who would like to join a test is different.Some wants to possess plenty of certificates so that they can find a better job than none of them.And always it don't need too much knowledge to prepare for it.Others prefer to prove themselves rather than just find a job.Because the certificate exam usually confront all kinds of people.People can confirm a proper level for themselves. In my opinion,take part in some exam for certificate is essential thing in our life.It can let us see ourselves clearly.However,if it get crazed,the things will become worse than better.Don't depend on certificate too much.It can't represent your ability completely.