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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活，但在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
I want to have a meaningful life,so does anyone else.Which one is the most significant in our live,different people may have difference opinions.However,the most important is that just like someone say "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." There indeed some accurates about this description.From myself,I once have a better study habits in my high school time. I used to study hard and enjoy the process of thinking math and physical equations.But in my colleague life, I addicted the oline and played games all days,which leads me lost the interest of learning.As a result, I became confuse and lose the direction to my future.At that time,how painful I regreted that I have waste so much time and realized I wouldn't live like before. Studying perhaps is not the greatest use of one's life,but what more important is the attitudes toward our life, a treasure quality,insist and never give up what you done.
