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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9022
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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I want to have a meaningful life,so does anyone else.Which one is the most significant in our live,different people may have difference opinions.However,the most important is that just like someone say "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." Indeedly,there are some accurate description about that statement.From myself,I once have a better study habits in my high school time. I used to study hard and enjoy the process of thinking math and physical equations.But in my university life, I addicted the online and played games all days,which leads me lost the interest of learning.As a result, I became confuse and lose the direction to my future.At that time,how painful I regret that I have waste so much time and realized I wouldn't live like before. Studying perhaps is not the greatest use of one's life,but what more important is the attitudes toward our life, a treasure quality,insist and never give up what you done.

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